homework ^^

2010-12-20 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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B. 4 I've heard about WLB, work ilfe balance. Now, I'm housewife, but after 3 years, I want to have a job. Then, to make a balance between my work and family, I'll have a telecommuting work. Many parents choose to work at home during their child's infancy.

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Hello [이름],          I'm happy to receive your composition today. It is early. ^^ I agree with you parents should really be at home especially when they have little children. If I will have a baby, I want to have a home-based job. See you later! -Verna-   B. 4 I've heard about WLB, work ilfe balance. >>I've heard about WLB, work life balance.Now, I'm housewife, but after 3 years, I want to have a job. >> Now I'm a housewife but after three years, I want to have a job.Then, to make a balance between my work and family, I'll have a telecommuting work.  >>Correct Many parents choose to work at home during their child's infancy. >>Correct  

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