homework ^^
학생이 쓴 원문
B. 4 I've heard about WLB, work ilfe balance.
Now, I'm housewife, but after 3 years, I want to have a job.
Then, to make a balance between my work and family, I'll have a telecommuting work. Many parents choose to work at home during their child's infancy.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
I'm happy to receive your composition today. It is early. ^^
I agree with you parents should really be at home especially when they
have little children. If I will have a baby, I want to have a home-based job.
See you later!
-Verna-
B. 4 I've heard about WLB, work ilfe balance.
>>I've heard about WLB, work life balance.Now, I'm housewife, but after 3 years, I want to have a job.
>> Now I'm a housewife but after three years, I want to have a job.Then, to make a balance between my work and family, I'll have a telecommuting work.
>>Correct
Many parents choose to work at home during their child's infancy.
>>Correct
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