Homework

2014-01-04 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

학생이 쓴 원문

1. I coudn't find my dictionary anywhere. My so-called friend has hidden it behind the computer. 2. Has your mother finished cooking dinner when you got home? 3. Her goldenfish was dead when she came back after a weeks's holiday. She had forgotten to feed it before went away. 4. I made a real mess of setting up my new computer system. I have finished the intructions carefully enough. 5. It was snowing when I left the house this morning, but it has stopped by the time I arrived in school. 6. The horse ran out because my father has shut the stable door. 7. I wanted to borrow his electronic dictionary but he lent to someone else.

강사 첨삭

A wonderful Friday evening to you!   T.G.I.F. Thank you so much for making your homework despite of your busy day. It really means that you are more than willing to learn. Here are the corrections that I\'ve included. I hope that these won\'t disappoint you. Instead use these as your basis so you will avoid making the same errors.   Good night and see you on Monday!   Always, ~Teacher Shanee^^-   1. I coudn\'t find my dictionary anywhere. My so-called friend has hidden it behind the computer.>>I couldn\'t find my dictionary anywhere. My so-called friend had hidden it behind the computer. 2. Has your mother finished cooking dinner when you got home?>>Had your mother finished cokking dinner when you got home? 3. Her goldenfish was dead when she came back after a weeks\'s holiday. She had forgotten to feed it before went away.>>Correct!4. I made a real mess of setting up my new computer system. I have finished the intructions carefully enough.>>I made a real mess of setting up my new computer system. I hadn\'t read the instructions carefully.5. It was snowing when I left the house this morning, but it has stopped by the time I arrived in school.>>It was snowing when I left the house this mroning, but it had stopped by the time I arrived in school. 6. The horse ran out because my father has shut the stable door.>>The horse ran out because my father hadn\'t shut the stable door.  7. I wanted to borrow his electronic dictionary but he lent to someone else. >>I wanted to borrow his electronic dictionary but he had lent it to someone else.

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