Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Great Monday morning Ms. [Name]!
It\'s good to know that you are on a good mood today.
Hope that will continue even at the end of the day. ^_~
And I do hope that you will be able to achieve all your plans this 2014.I know it is not easy but with perseverance, you will be able to do it.
So fighting!
You can do it!
Thanks for today!
See you!
Take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
What is your New Year\'s resolution for 2014?
I heard nice news the last day in this year.
>> I heard some nice news on the last day of this year.
That is my younger brother was promoted in his company and he got a prize that is given to best staff.
>> That is, my younger brother was promoted in his company and he got a prize which is given to the best staff.
I start new year with this happy news.
>> I started my new year with this happy news.
We should have party next afternoon but they couldn\'t get up early.
>> correct!
That is becasue they went to beach for first sunrise.
>> It is because they went to the beach as soon as the sun rise.
Finally, I met my friend at the cafe.
>> correct!
We shared our new year, 2014.
>> correct!
It taked about 8 hours. Hahaha.
>> It took us for about 8 hours. Hahaha.
We are in the mid 30\'s so we have to work hard in the company.
>>
correct!
It is not easy so we need wisdom.
>>
correct!
Especially, relationship is very important so we wish to have wisdom together.
>>
correct!
We also want to have power and ability in our work.
>>
correct!
>> or: We also want to have power and ability at work.
We also shared about our resoution.
>> correct! (spelling correction-resolution)
we\'d like to have kindly and thanksful mind.
>> We\'d like to a kind and thankful mind.
I\'d like to read many books and I want to have high score of TOEIC.
>> I\'d like to read many books and I want to have a high score in TOEIC.
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