Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Happy and cheerful Tuesday morning to you Ms. [Name]!
Well, I totally agree that it\'s all up to us if we are going to save our world or not so that it will not end.
I hope that the happenings that I am watching in the movies will not eventually happen to our planet.
So every people should really help saving mother earth.
Thanks for the nice essay!
Great one!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
How do you think human civilization will ultimately end?
Wow. this topic is very sad.
>> Wow. This topic is very sad.
>> or; Wow, it\'s a very sad topic.
I don\'t know about future of human civilization.
>> I don\' t know the future of human civilization.
However I don\'t think it will ultimately end.
>> correct!
Is there any method. isn\'t it?
>> Is there any method? Isn\'t it?
These day, environment pollution is very serious so we can\'t eat any food easily.
>> These days, environment pollution is very serious so we can\'t eat any food easily.
Many people think fish is dangerous for radioactivity in Korea.
>> Many people think that eating a fish is dangerous because of the radioactivity in Korea.
Moreover, we have facing abnormal climate.
>> Moreover, we have been facing an abnormal climate.
It is very starnage that it\'s snowy in summer.
>> correct! (spelling correction-strange)
Furthermore we heard heavy rainy and snow.
>>
correct!
I\'m scared when I hear these news and I think about human civilization\'s future.
>> correct!
In the Bible, refer to the end and we can live heavn finally.
>> In the Bible, it refers to the end so we can finally live in heaven.
I\'d like to believe this.
>> correct!
On the other hand, we have to protect our Earth beautifully and clearly.
>> correct!
I thinnk it\'s up to us.
>> correct! (spelling correction-think)
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