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2014-01-07 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Do you agree that one MUST learn English to be competitive in the society? In the Korea, a lot of people say learning English is necessary to be competitive in the society. On the other hand, someone say techonology will be more developed so translation system will be come to right. Finally, I agree with two of opinions. English is important in the world because our territory is not just our country. We have to go out and get it so we have to learn English. This is because communication is core in everything. Translation system, do you think it would be reach the limit? Nowadays. many people say China will be outstanding country so we may have to study chiness. Language become a means of communication. We seem to get a something as we communicate. Therefore we have to learn English to be competitive in the society now.

강사 첨삭

Hello there once again Ms. [Name]! 

Indeed, language will make us competitive.

Not only at work but also in a lot of things especially socially. 

And I think China needs more time to be number one globally so learning Chinese is not that yet so important nowadays. 
But who knows what the future brings? 

It\'s not quite easy to predict. 
So I guess, learning English should be more prioritized than Chinese. 
Thanks for sharing your thoughts. 

See you again tomorrow! 

Enjoy your day! 

Take care! 


Always, 

Kathrine ^^



Do you agree that one MUST learn English to be competitive in the society?


In the Korea, a lot of people say learning English is necessary to be competitive in the society.

>>  correct! 

On the other hand, someone say techonology will be more developed so translation system will be come to right.

>>  On the other hand, some people say that technology will be more developed so translation system will come rightfully. 

Finally, I agree with two of opinions.

>>   Finally, I agree with these two opinions. 

English is important in the world because our territory is not just our country. 

>>  correct! 

We have to go out and get it so we have to learn English.

>>    correct!  

This is because communication is core in everything.

>>  This is because communication is the core of everything. 

Translation system, do you think it would be reach the limit? 

>>  Do you think translation system would reach its limit? 

Nowadays. many people say China will be outstanding country so we may have to study chiness.

>>  Nowadays, many people said that China will be an outstanding country so we have to study Chinese. 

Language become a means of communication.

>>  Language becomes a means of communication. 

We seem to get a something as we communicate. 

>>  We seem to get something when we communicate. 

Therefore we have to learn English to be competitive in the society now.

>>  correct! 

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