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2014-01-08 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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These day, I am having two of classes in the graduate school. It is very interesting. I'm attending Media reading and talking in English. Actually it is not easy but I'm enjoying these now. However I have to go to the business trip tomorrow. I will start to there at 7 so I can't have English class with you. See you Thursday morning. 1. Moving to the rhythm is the same as "moving to the beat". 2. I bought some instructional dance videos online. 3. You have to move your right foot forward, not backward. 4. Do not bend your back! ( = make sure your back is straight) 5. He is a very graceful dancer. He moves beautifully. 6. Ballet dancers often dance on their toes. 7. A good dancer should be both expressive and artistic. 8. A good dance instructor will help you achieve good form. 9. It was a very difficult movement. I couldn't keep my balance and I fell down. 10. Loosen up a bit; you're too stuffed! ( = rigid)

강사 첨삭

A happy and invigorating Wednesday Ms. [Name]!  

Thanks for answering your homework. 

Actually, most of my students have the same mistake on numbers 4 and 10. 

I don\'t know why. kkk ^_~

Please review the corrections below and if you have questions just tell me on Thursday. 

Good luck on your business trip and take care! 

See you! 


Always, 

Kathrine ^^


These day, I am having two of classes in the graduate school.

>>  These days, I am having two classes in the graduate school. 

It is very interesting.

>>  correct! 

I\'m attending Media reading and talking in English.

>>  correct! 

Actually it is not easy but I\'m enjoying these now.

>>  correct! 

However I have to go to the business trip tomorrow.

>>  However, I have to go to a business trip tomorrow. 

I will start to there at 7 so I can\'t have English class with you.

>>  I will start at 7 am so i can\'t have the English class with you. 

See you Thursday morning.

>> See you on Thursday morning. 
1. Moving to the rhythm is the same as \"moving to the beat\".
>> correct! 
2. I bought some instructional dance videos online.
>>   correct! 
3. You have to move your right foot forward, not backward.
>>   correct! 
4. Do not bend your back! ( = make sure your back is straight)
>> arch 
5. He is a very graceful dancer. He moves beautifully.
>>   correct! 
6. Ballet dancers often dance on their toes.
>>   correct! 
7. A good dancer should be both expressive and artistic.
>> expressive  
8. A good dance instructor will help you achieve good form.
>>   correct!   
9. It was a very difficult movement. I couldn\'t keep my balance and I fell down.
>>   correct! 

10. Loosen up a bit; you\'re too stuffed! ( = rigid)

>> stiff

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