Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
A happy and invigorating Wednesday Ms. [Name]!
Thanks for answering your homework.
Actually, most of my students have the same mistake on numbers 4 and 10.
I don\'t know why. kkk ^_~
Please review the corrections below and if you have questions just tell me on Thursday.
Good luck on your business trip and take care!
See you!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
These day, I am having two of classes in the graduate school.
>> These days, I am having two classes in the graduate school.
It is very interesting.
>> correct!
I\'m attending Media reading and talking in English.
>> correct!
Actually it is not easy but I\'m enjoying these now.
>> correct!
However I have to go to the business trip tomorrow.
>> However, I have to go to a business trip tomorrow.
I will start to there at 7 so I can\'t have English class with you.
>> I will start at 7 am so i can\'t have the English class with you.
See you Thursday morning.
1. Moving to the rhythm is the same as \"moving to the beat\".
>> correct!
2. I bought some instructional dance videos online.
>> correct!
3. You have to move your right foot forward, not backward.
>> correct!
4. Do not bend your back! ( = make sure your back is straight)
>> arch
5. He is a very graceful dancer. He moves beautifully.
>> correct!
6. Ballet dancers often dance on their toes.
>> correct!
7. A good dancer should be both expressive and artistic.
>> expressive
8. A good dance instructor will help you achieve good form.
>> correct!
9. It was a very difficult movement. I couldn\'t keep my balance and I fell down.
>> correct!
10. Loosen up a bit; you\'re too stuffed! ( = rigid)
>> stiff
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