Homework

Hi,

I appreciate that you answered your homework.

We still need to work a little on your grammar but other than that, good job!!!

Keep smiling and work harder.

It was a good composition and it scared me as well!!!

I\'m proud of you!!!

T.Theresa^^

I have scariest experience.

>>I have the scariest experience.

I don\'t know exactly when it happened.

>>CORRECT

I think it was when I was young.

>>I think when I was young.

That time I was sleeping until afternoon.

>>At that time, I was sleeping \"from morning until afternoon\".

My all family came out.

>>All the members of my family went out.

So I was along.

>>I was alone at home.

Before I woke up, I had nightmare.

>>Before I woke up, I had a nightmare.

I fogot the story but it was a very scary thing
and I couldn\'t move.

>>Correct [forgot] 

That was why as soon as I woke up, I couldn\'t stand up immediately.

>>That\'s why as soon as I woke up, I couldn\'t stand up immediately.

That time, I watched something white and moving.

>>At that time I saw something white and it\'s moving.

I wanted to stand up, but I couldn\'t.

>>CORRECT

I was very scared.

>>CORRECT

It was all that cried.

>>All I can do is cry.

Fourtunately, My mom was around home.

>>Fortunately, my mom was around.

So she listened and came.

>>My mom came out and listened to my story/to what I had to say then.
It is my scariest experience.

>>Correct^^