homework
학생이 쓴 원문
No,games aren't as important for adults as they are for children.
In Korea, most people play the games,so they become very bad.
They hit another people easily.
강사 첨삭
A superb Wednesday to you Tom!
I am so happy with your sentences today. ^^
I encourage you to make your essay longer.
It is a way for you to improve your writing skills too.
Can you tell me more about this later in class? See you!
Teacher Nina
No,games aren\'t as important for adults as they are for children.
>> Correct!
In Korea, most people play the games,so they become very bad.
>> Did you mean: In Korea, most people who play games become bad.
>> OR: The people who play games become a bad person.
They hit another people easily.
>> They hit another person easily.
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