homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
A nice Thursday afternoon to you TOM!
Wow! Amazing! You almost got a perfect score again! Yipee!
I think you really had a wonderful time. I am also proud of you!
Can you share that special story to me in class?
I am excited to hear it. You are doing a very good job in our class.
I encourage you to compose more sentences and share a lot of ideas in class.
You can do it! See you!
Teacher Nina
1.he
>> me
2.them
>> Correct!
3.him
>> Correct!
4.us
>> Correct!
5.me
>> Correct!
6.her
>> Correct!
7.it
>> Correct!
8.him
>> Correct!
9.them
>> Correct!
10.us
>> Correct!
Today was the last of reading class.
>> Today was the last day of my reading class.
It was very interesting.
>> Correct!
I was proud of myself that I made a special story.
>> I was proud of myself because I made a special story.
>> OR: I was proud of myself because I was able to compose a special story.
I couldn\'t believe it.
>> Correct!
I want to try this class next year.
>> I want to try this class again next year.
>> OR:
I want to attend this class again next year.
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