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2014-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.he 2.them 3.him 4.us 5.me 6.her 7.it 8.him 9.them 10.us Today was the last of reading class. It was very interesting. I was proud of myself that I made a special story. I couldn't believe it. I want to try this class next year.

강사 첨삭

A nice Thursday afternoon to you TOM! 

Wow! Amazing! You almost got a perfect score again! Yipee!

I think you really had a wonderful time. I am also proud of you!

Can you share that special story to me in class? 

I am excited to hear it. You are doing a very good job in our class.

I encourage you to compose more sentences and share a lot of ideas in class. 

You can do it! See you!

Teacher Nina


1.he

>> me

2.them

>> Correct! 

3.him

>> Correct! 

4.us

>> Correct! 

5.me

>> Correct! 

6.her

>> Correct! 

7.it

>> Correct! 

8.him

>> Correct! 

9.them

>> Correct! 

10.us

>> Correct! 


Today was the last of reading class.

>> Today was the last day of my reading class.

It was very interesting.

>> Correct! 

I was proud of myself that I made a special story.

>> I was proud of myself because I made a special story.

>> OR: I was proud of myself because I was able to compose a special story. 

I couldn\'t believe it.

>> Correct! 

I want to try this class next year.

>> I want to try this class again next year.

>> OR:  I want to attend this class again next year.

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