Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there again Ms. [Name]!
I also like watching Glee actually.
I like the songs and the performances of each characters in the drama.
I don\'t have enough time to watch too so I just download the whole series so if I have time, I can watch it. kkk.
It\'s good to know that you are enjoying it too.
Well, thanks for today\'s class and good luck in your activities this week.
See you tomorrow!
Enjoy your day!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
How are you?
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I\'m very tired because of my homework.
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I have to trancelate two articles English into Korea until tomorrow.
>> I have to translate two articles from Englsih to Korean until tomorrow.
The articles are very long and difficult.
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Especially vocabulary is hard and sturctures are complicated.
>> Especially, the vocabulary is very hard the structures are complicated.
He who is professor in this semester is very strict.
>> My professor this semester is very strict.
I also will have a test coming Wednesday.
>> I will also have a test this coming Wednesday.
Actually I know it will be helping me but I\'d like to avoid these. Hahaha.
>> Actually, I know that it will help me but I\'d like to avoid these. Hahaha.
At this time, below topic is good.
>> At this time, the topic below is good.
If you had 25 hours a day (while everyone else continued to have 24 hours a day), what would you do with the extra time.
God give us time fairly.
>> God gives us time fairly.
However I get 25 hourse. It is very special and I\'m so happy.
>> However, if I can have 25 hours, it will be very special for me and I will be so happy.
Right now, I\'d like to sleep some more in the warm room.
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Nowadays when I get up, I can\'t feel good.
>> Nowadays, when I get up, I don\'t feel good.
I don\'t know why I\'m not good.
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And I want to read books.
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If I am bored, I will watch the western drama, glee.
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Theseday, I often watch the movie, glee before going to bed.
>> These days, I often watch the drama Glee before going to bed.
It\'s very interesting but I don\'t have free time enough.
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Thank you. See you soon.
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