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2014-01-13 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.a lot of 2.a lot of 3.much 4.much 5.much 6.much 7.a lot of 8.much 9.much 10.a lot of I'll sleep in Lotte Hotel during 1days. I'll have fun. I'm so nervous. My mom alaways makes me happy. I'm so greatful to my mom.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Tom!
Happy Monday! It\'s the start of our wonderful week again!
How was your weekend? Really?
When are you going to Lotte Hotel? Wow!
I hope that you will have a great time! Why are you nervous?
Can you tell me about it in class? ^^
Yes, you are right. Your mom makes you happy always.
Don\'t forget to show appreciation to your mom. ^^
You\'re fortunate to have her. ^^
See you! Take Care!
Teacher Nina

1.a lot of
>> Correct!
2.a lot of
>> much
3.much
>> Correct!
4.much
>> a lot of
5.much
>> Correct!
6.much
>> Correct!
7.a lot of
>> Correct!
8.much
>> a lot of
9.much
>> Correct!
10.a lot of
>> Correct!

I\'ll sleep in Lotte Hotel during 1days.
>> I will sleep in Lotte Hotel for one day.
I\'ll have fun.
>> Correct!
I\'m so nervous.
>> Correct!
My mom alaways makes me happy.
>> Correct! ( Spelling check: always ^^ )
>> OR: My mom makes me happy always.
I\'m so greatful to my mom.
>> I\'m so grateful to my mom.

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