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2014-01-14 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

I'm in the my grandmother's house right now. I'm so happy. My husband went to the hometown for work so I came back here after class. My grandmother seemed to go to the senior citizen center so I am having a relax time alone. I'm good. If you were American/Chinese/Canadian/Mexican (or any other nationality that you want to), how would your life be different? If I were American or Canadian, I was teaching English in Korea. Hahaha. I think It is not important where I was born. However I was influenced by country enviroment. On second thoughts, my life would totally change. At this point of time, I think education is important. I would adapt the system and culture and I would live hard, pleasantly and positively. I couldn't get out of the country's area greatly.

강사 첨삭

A radiant Tuesday morning Ms. [Name]! 

Thanks for sharing your thoughts here. 

Well, I think that your life will truly and greatly change if you are not Korean. 

But it\'s good to know that you will still teach English to Koreans. 

You are still a teacher at heart. 

Anyway, thanks for today and see you again tomorrow. 

Enjoy your day! 

Take care! 


Always, 
Kathrine ^^


I\'m in the my grandmother\'s house right now.

>> correct! 

I\'m so happy.

>>   correct! 

My husband went to the hometown for work so I came back here after class. 

>>  My husband to work in the hometown so I came here after class. 

My grandmother seemed to go to the senior citizen center so I am having a relax time alone.

>>  My grandmother went to the the senior citizen center so I\'m having the time to relax. 

I\'m good.

>>  correct! 


If you were American/Chinese/Canadian/Mexican (or any other nationality that you want to), how would your life be different?

If I were American or Canadian, I was teaching English in Korea. Hahaha.

>>  correct! 

I think It is not important where I was born.

>>   correct! 

However I was influenced by country enviroment.

>>  However, I was influenced by the country\'s environment. 

On second thoughts, my life would totally change.

>> On a second thought, my life would totally change. 

At this point of time, I think education is important.

>>   At this point in time, I think education is important. 

I would adapt the system and culture and I would live hard, pleasantly and positively.

>> I would adapt the system and the culture and I would live pleasantly and positively. 

I couldn\'t get out of the country\'s area greatly.

>> correct! 

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