homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
A radiant Tuesday morning Ms. [Name]!
Thanks for sharing your thoughts here.
Well, I think that your life will truly and greatly change if you are not Korean.
But it\'s good to know that you will still teach English to Koreans.
You are still a teacher at heart.
Anyway, thanks for today and see you again tomorrow.
Enjoy your day!
Take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
I\'m in the my grandmother\'s house right now.
>> correct!
I\'m so happy.
>> correct!
My husband went to the hometown for work so I came back here after class.
>> My husband to work in the hometown so I came here after class.
My grandmother seemed to go to the senior citizen center so I am having a relax time alone.
>> My grandmother went to the the senior citizen center so I\'m having the time to relax.
I\'m good.
>> correct!
If I were American or Canadian, I was teaching English in Korea. Hahaha.
>> correct!
I think It is not important where I was born.
>> correct!
However I was influenced by country enviroment.
>> However, I was influenced by the country\'s environment.
On second thoughts, my life would totally change.
>> On a second thought, my life would totally change.
At this point of time, I think education is important.
>> At this point in time, I think education is important.
I would adapt the system and culture and I would live hard, pleasantly and positively.
>> I would adapt the system and the culture and I would live pleasantly and positively.
I couldn\'t get out of the country\'s area greatly.
>> correct!
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