homework ^^
학생이 쓴 원문
1. yes, I do.
When I have a really busy schedule, I've got a stress. So I try to not make a busy schedule.
2. When I was a highschool student, I got up at 5 a.m.
Because there was an exam.
3. Now I have no job.
4. When I have a request for my boss, I often sent the mail.
In my case, mail is efficient.
강사 첨삭
Hi there,
How are you doing [이름]? It's a happy Thursday for me
because we have nice weather. Well with your composition,
I guess having tons of things to do is really stressful so you're not alone.
kkk. Just always remember to smile.
-Verna-
1. Yes, I do.
>>Correct
When I have a really busy schedule, I've got a stress.
>>Correct
So I try to not make a busy schedule.>> So, I try not to make a busy schedule.2. When I was a highschool student, I got up at 5 a.m.
>> When I was a high school student, I get up at 5 a.m.Because there was an exam.>>Correct3. Now I have no job.>>Correct4. When I have a request for my boss, I often sent the mail.
>>When I have a request for my boss, I often sent e-mail.In my case, mail is efficient.
>>In my opinion, sending mail is convenient.
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