homework ^^

2010-12-23 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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1. yes, I do. When I have a really busy schedule, I've got a stress. So I try to not make a busy schedule. 2. When I was a highschool student, I got up at 5 a.m. Because there was an exam. 3. Now I have no job. 4. When I have a request for my boss, I often sent the mail. In my case, mail is efficient.

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Hi there,       How are you doing [이름]? It's a happy Thursday for me because we have nice weather. Well with your composition, I guess having tons of things to do is really stressful so you're not alone. kkk. Just always remember to smile. -Verna-   1. Yes, I do. >>Correct When I have a really busy schedule, I've got a stress.  >>Correct So I try to not make a busy schedule.>> So, I try not to make a busy schedule.2. When I was a highschool student, I got up at 5 a.m. >> When I was a high school student, I get up at 5 a.m.Because there was an exam.>>Correct3. Now I have no job.>>Correct4. When I have a request for my boss, I often sent the mail. >>When I have a request for my boss, I often sent e-mail.In my case, mail is efficient. >>In my opinion, sending mail is convenient.

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