homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Because there are new interresting things in the museums.
And each countries have slightly different museum.
So I think having a great time in the museum is good way too.
Sometimes,it rains.then people can't ply outside.
then people usually go to the museum.
강사 첨삭
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Teacher Nina
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>> It is because there are new interesting things in museums.
>> OR: You will be able to see new and interesting things in museums.
And each countries have slightly different museum.
And each countries have slightly different museum.
>> Did you mean: In each country, there is a slight difference with its museums.
>> OR: The museums in each country is different with the others.
So I think having a great time in the museum is good way too.
>> So, I think having a great time in the museum is a good way too.
>> OR: Having a great time visiting museums is good.
Sometimes,it rains.then people can\'t ply outside, then people usually go to the museum.
Sometimes,it rains.then people can\'t ply outside, then people usually go to the museum.
>> It sometimes rains so people can\'t play outside, then people usually go to museums.
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