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2014-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.a 2.b 3.b 4.a 5.b 6.a 7.a 8.b 9.b 10.a I invited something.^^ I'll patent it I couldn't explain it But I'm sure that invention will help people more convenient

강사 첨삭

Hi there Tom!

It\'s the fourth day of the week again. ^^

How are you today? Did you have a great day?

How was your homework? I think you were a bit confused.

Don\'t worry, I will explain it to you in class.

Really? You invented something? Can you show it in class, please?

Tell me more about your essay in class. See you!
Teacher Nina


1.a

>> B
2.b

>> A
3.b

>> Correct!
4.a

>> Correct!
5.b

>> A
6.a

>> B
7.a

>> Correct!
8.b

>> Correct!
9.b

>> A
10.a

>> B

I invited something.^^

>> Did you mean: I invented something.
I\'ll patent it

>> Did you mean: My invention will be patent.
I couldn\'t explain it

>> Correct!

>> OR: I couldn\'t express it.
But I\'m sure that invention will help people more convenient

>> But I\'m sure that invention will help people have a more convenient life.

>> OR: But I\'m sure that with invention the life of people will be more convenient.

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