Homework.

2014-01-22 · 첨삭 강사 Theresa

학생이 쓴 원문

You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. I don't know what it means. Is it right that you have to do your best when you want to do something? If my explanation is correct, I think it is totally right. There is nothing for free. If you want to get high score, you might study harder than others. So in my opinion, effort is based on every things.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

Thank you so much for doing your homework.

I really appreciate that you are doing your best.

I know that you are busy and yet you are studying very hard.

I am really happy that your exerting effort.

This quotation is about giving wealth or possessions.

It is like when you give something you are giving a part of yourself.

What I like in your answer is that it can be connected in this quotation.

We know that before we became rich we have to do our best in work and studies.

Well, I hope that you will enjoy the rest of your time.

Thank you again.

Have a great night ahead.

~Teacher Theresa.

I don\'t know what it means.

>> Correct.

OR:
>> I don\'t know what it meaning of this quotation.
Is it right that you have to do your best when you want to do something?
>> Correct.

OR:

>> Is it right that you have to do your best when you want to achieve something?
 If my explanation is correct, I think it is totally right.
>> If my explanation is correct, I think I am totally right.
There is nothing for free.
>> There is nothing for free in this world.
If you want to get high score, you might study harder than others.
>> If you want to get a high score, you should study harder than others.
So in my opinion, effort is based on every things.

>> So in my opinion, effort is based on every thing that you do.

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