homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there Tom!
A nice Thursday afternoon to you! I do love reading your essays!
Keep on writing! Try to make it longer, in order for you to improve your writing skill too.
How many words do you study in a day? Do you remember all of it?
I can\'t remember how many words I studied when I was young.
My mother asked me to read a lot of books before.
How about you? How many books do you read in a month?
Share your ideas in class. Please go over the corrections I gave you.
Take Care! Have a fun day!
Teacher Nina
Because we can more be ripening.
>> Did you mean: It is because we will be ripened.
>> OR: Our thoughts will be ripened when learn more words.
But according to what I heard , our brain can\'t remember more than 100words.
>> Correct!
>> OR: According to what I hear, our brain can\'t retain more than one hundred words.
When the brain remember more than 100words,we can remember only 1words.
>> Did you mean: When the brain retain more than one hundred words, we can only remember a word.
>> OR: When we retain more than one hundred words in our brain, out of those words we can only remember one word.
But it is good for our thinking.
>> But it is good our mind.
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