Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good day my dear and happy Friday^^
I was not able to catch you today because you put your class on hold. I know you will be very busy so I understand.
Thanks for your time in doing this composition. I already checked your sentences so have time to see and study my corrections.
Learn from them^^ By the way I like your answer here. Pretty smart=) GOOD JOB again.
See you and have a blast this weekend~
Teacher Liza
What are the things you do when studying for a big exam? Do you have many preparations or rituals to do before studying?
Before the test, it is natural to study about the test subjects more directly and seriously.
>> Correct
>> OR: Before the exam day will come, it is just necessary to study the scope of exams directly and seriously.
So Before the studuying, I remind myself to think , why I have to study and What is the goal of studying like this so hard.
>>So before studying, I remind myself why I have to study and what is the purpose of studying so hard.
The goal offered, I started to concentrate on my studying.
>> YOU MEAN TO SAY: If I set my goal then I start to concentrate on reviewing my notes.
And the most important part is to remove things that can disturb and be harmful to your studying.
>>Correct
>> One thing more, the most important thing to do is to remove the things that can disturb me when studying.
>> OR: One thing more, the most important thing to do is to put away the things that can destroy or delay my concentration when studying.
For example, replace the cellphone where you can\'t see.
>> For example, putting away my cellphone from me where in I can\'t see it.
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