Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Thank you so much for doing your homework I am really happy.
You are right if a person really loves you and you love him too, both of you should be patient enough to understand each other.
If this will happen your relationship will grow and it will be sweeter as time goes on.
As you know patient is about understanding each others mistake and forgiving.
Well [이름], I am very happy that you are doing your best in studying.
Please rest well and please don\'t work too hard tomorrow.
So that you will not be going to be tired okay.
Take care always okay.
Sleep well and eat well okay.
See you on Monday!
~Teacher Theresa
Love is patient.
I think It is difficult to meet someone who fits perfctly with me.
>> I think It is difficult to meet someone who will fits my character perfectly.
So although I have a boy friend, I have to keep with him.
>> So although I have a boy friend I have to keep with him and be with him.
Maybe we have to try to change our tastes, hobby, habits or characters.
>> Maybe we should try to change our tastes, hobby or our bad characters.
So if we fall in love, we have to be patient.
>> Correct
OR:
>> Even if we fall in love we should be patient with each other.
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