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2014-01-27 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Long time no see. I should get up early this morning but I couldn't it. I'm sorry that I didn't have a class. After traveling I don't return my life rhythm. I had stayed in Honhkong just for a day so the schedule was so tight. I went to bed late and then I get up early during traveling. When I went to the Singapore by airplane early in the morning. Singarpore was very beautiful and clean. The weather was really nice. Especilly night view was fantastic. Although I have ever been visited Singarpore two years ago, it was different. But I lost my cell phone in the Singapore. I was say for losten my cellphone. I can't understand how and where my phone is. I didn't have been lived for a month during winter vacation so I think my home is best. However Lunar New year's day is coming soon so I have to pack my suitcase. My school will open at Febuary 3rd. I can live reguarly at that time. See you tomorrow.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Ms. [Name]!
Long time no see!

I missed you! ^^

I am happy that you are bask safely.

Well, I do understand that you were not able to have our class today.
It seems that you are still on a jet lag.
So I do hope that you will be okay tomorrow.

See you then and take care!


Always,

Kathrine ^^


Long time no see.

>>  correct!

 I should get up early this morning but I couldn\'t it.

>>  I should get up early this morning but I couldn\'t do it.

 I\'m sorry that I didn\'t have a class.

>>  I\'m sorry that I didn\'t have the class.

 After traveling I don\'t return my life rhythm.

>>  After traveling, my life rhythm haven\'t return yet.

I had stayed in Honhkong just for a day so the schedule was so tight.

>>  I styed in Hong Kong for one day so the schedule was so tight.

I went to bed late and then I get up early during traveling.

>>  I went to bed late and got up early while traveling.

When I went to the Singapore by airplane early in the morning.

>>  I went to Singapore by an airplane early in the morning.

Singarpore was very beautiful and clean.

>>  Singapore is very beautiful and clean.

The weather was really nice.

>>  correct!

 Especilly night view was fantastic.

>>  The night view was especially fantastic.

Although I have ever been visited Singarpore two years ago, it was different.

>>  Although I had visited Singapore 2 years ago, it was still different.

But I lost my cell phone in the Singapore.

>>  But I lost my cellphone in Singapore.

I was say for losten my cellphone.

>>  I was sad that I lost it.

I can\'t understand how and where my phone is.

>>  I don\'t know where and how I lost it.

I didn\'t have been lived for a month during winter vacation so I think my home is best.

>>  I didn\'t live in my house for a month during the winter vacation so I think my home is still the best.

 However Lunar New year\'s day is coming soon so I have to pack my suitcase.

>>  However, the Lunar New Year is coming soon so I have to pack my suitcase.

My school will open at Febuary 3rd.

>> correct!

I can live reguarly at that time.

>>  correct!

See you tomorrow.

>>  correct!

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