Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [Name]!
Long time no see!
I missed you! ^^
I am happy that you are bask safely.
Well, I do understand that you were not able to have our class today.
It seems that you are still on a jet lag.
So I do hope that you will be okay tomorrow.
See you then and take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Long time no see.
>> correct!
I should get up early this morning but I couldn\'t it.
>> I should get up early this morning but I couldn\'t do it.
I\'m sorry that I didn\'t have a class.
>> I\'m sorry that I didn\'t have the class.
After traveling I don\'t return my life rhythm.
>> After traveling, my life rhythm haven\'t return yet.
I had stayed in Honhkong just for a day so the schedule was so tight.
>> I styed in Hong Kong for one day so the schedule was so tight.
I went to bed late and then I get up early during traveling.
>> I went to bed late and got up early while traveling.
When I went to the Singapore by airplane early in the morning.
>> I went to Singapore by an airplane early in the morning.
Singarpore was very beautiful and clean.
>> Singapore is very beautiful and clean.
The weather was really nice.
>> correct!
Especilly night view was fantastic.
>> The night view was especially fantastic.
Although I have ever been visited Singarpore two years ago, it was different.
>> Although I had visited Singapore 2 years ago, it was still different.
But I lost my cell phone in the Singapore.
>> But I lost my cellphone in Singapore.
I was say for losten my cellphone.
>> I was sad that I lost it.
I can\'t understand how and where my phone is.
>> I don\'t know where and how I lost it.
I didn\'t have been lived for a month during winter vacation so I think my home is best.
>> I didn\'t live in my house for a month during the winter vacation so I think my home is still the best.
However Lunar New year\'s day is coming soon so I have to pack my suitcase.
>> However, the Lunar New Year is coming soon so I have to pack my suitcase.
My school will open at Febuary 3rd.
>> correct!
I can live reguarly at that time.
>> correct!
See you tomorrow.
>> correct!
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