Homework

Once again, hello Ms. [Name]! ^^

It\'s nice to have you back.
I\'m happy to read you compositions again.
Well,  I think you didn\'t get the idea in the question.
What I mean there is that what are the things to be preserved so that Korea will be truly Korean.

Korean are known for good dishes like Kimchi, samgyupsal, bulgogi, etc.
Koreans are known for Hanbok, your traditional clothes.

Koreans are known for beautiful traditional houses.

So those should be the things that must be preserved.
But anyway, you also have a point.

Korean should keep their history.

Of course, history is the identity of one\'s country.
So Koreans  should preserved that too.
Anyway, thanks for sharing your thoughts Ms. [Name]!
Hope you will be fine for tomorrow.
See you then!

Always,

Kathrine ^^

What must be preserved to keep Korea truly Korean? Or does it matter?

 The question is not easy.

>> correct!

We have to keep our country.

>>  correct!

I know ducation of Korea history is be important.

>>  I know that education/knowledge of Korea\'s history is important.

We need to know our history because we can develop our country.

correct!

Therefore we have to know our right history and then we can keep Korea.

>>  correct! 

There are a lot of remains and relics so we have to keep it, too. 

>>  correct!
 Alos environment is very important.

>>  Our environment is also important.

 It is related our health.

>>  It is related to our health.

Healthy people may make and keep Korea.

>> correct!

So we have to preserve our clean country.

>>  correct!

When I watched on TV, I listen to the bad news.

>>  When I watched on TV, I saw a bad news.

It is about bird flu.

>>  correct!

We have to be careful our duck and chiken.

>>  We have to be careful on ducks and chickens.

 My husband and I am having oriental medicine so we have to avoid fork, chicken, alcohol, vinegar and radish for a month.

>>  My husband and I are having an oriental medicine so we have to avoid pork, chicken, alcohol, vinegar and radish for a month.

 I think it is good point.

>>  I think it is a good point.

Usually Korean is worring about food.

>>  Usually, Koreans are worrying about food.

Whatever I wish healthy Korea. 

>>  Whatever it is, I wish a healthy Korea.
 I mean, first of all, we will have to preserve our history and environment.

>>  correct!