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2014-01-28 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Write about the things that should be considered first when buying furniture. I considered design more than practical. I like so natural that kind of bird or tree etc. Than I considered practical, price, brand. Practicality is important to know the head. But I more like beautiful design. The following is the practicality of the design. Not out of necessity. I know much of my vanity. I love beautiful design.

강사 첨삭

Hello there!
Thank you for doing your homework!^>^
You expressed your ideas well however, please find time to check my corrections.
It can help you build your skill in constructing sentences. If you have further questions, feel free to ask me.
~~Teacher Shanee~~
Write about the things that should be considered first when buying furniture.
I considered design more than practical.
>>I consider the design more than practicality.
I like so natural that kind of bird or tree etc. Than I considered practical, price, brand.
>>I like considering the designs which are related to nature like birds or trees and others than considering the practicality, price and the brand.
Practicality is important to know the head.
>>Correct.
But I more like beautiful design.
>>But I like a beautiful design more.^^
The following is the practicality of the design.
>>Correct.
Not out of necessity.
>>It\'s not out of necessity.
I know much of my vanity.
>>Correct.
I love beautiful design.
>>I love beautiful designs.^^

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