Homework

2014-01-28 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Write an essay about your favorite restaurant. I favorite pasta restaurant. I love pasta, pizza and steak. I think steak is so expensive than I can't eat often that food. Hing ... a little sad. My favorite pasta is pasta with cheese oven. And favorite pizza is Gorgonzola with the honey. This is really fantastic.

강사 첨삭

Hello there!

Thank you for doing your homework.

I enjoyed reading it. It made me a little hungry.  (^^,)

Anyway, please check the corrections and suggestions I made. I do hope that I got your ideas correctly.

See you in class.

~T. Shanee~

Write an essay about your favorite restaurant.
I favorite pasta restaurant.

>> I love pasta restaurants. They are my favorites!
 I love pasta, pizza and steak.

>> Correct!
 I think steak is so expensive than I can\'t eat often that food.

>> I think steak is so expensive so I can\'t eat it often.

 Hing ... a little sad.

>> It\'s a little sad.
 My favorite pasta is pasta with cheese oven.

>> My favorite pasta is baked pasta with cheese.

OR>> My favorite pasta is baked macaroni.
 And favorite pizza is Gorgonzola with the honey.

>> And my favorite pizza is Gorgonzola with honey.^^
 This is really fantastic.

>> Correct!^^

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