Homework
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강사 첨삭
Hello there!
Thank you for doing your homework.
I enjoyed reading it. It made me a little hungry. (^^,)
Anyway, please check the corrections and suggestions I made. I do hope that I got your ideas correctly.
See you in class.
~T. Shanee~
Write an essay about your favorite restaurant.
I favorite pasta restaurant.
>> I love pasta restaurants. They are my favorites!
I love pasta, pizza and steak.
>> Correct!
I think steak is so expensive than I can\'t eat often that food.
>> I think steak is so expensive so I can\'t eat it often.
Hing ... a little sad.
>> It\'s a little sad.
My favorite pasta is pasta with cheese oven.
>> My favorite pasta is baked pasta with cheese.
OR>> My favorite pasta is baked macaroni.
And favorite pizza is Gorgonzola with the honey.
>> And my favorite pizza is Gorgonzola with honey.^^
This is really fantastic.
>> Correct!^^
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