Homework

Hi there!

Happy Tuesday! Thank you for sharing your opinions about the story.

In some points, I agree with you.^^_
Anyway, here are some corrections that I made. If you have some queries, don\'t hesitate to ask me, okay?

Good night and see you in class!

Teacher Shanee^^

I think story ending is often not good.

>>I think stories\' endings are often not good.
 For example, I like Harry Potter.

>>Correct!
 But I don\'t like the original ending of the story of Harry Potter.

>>Correct!
 Because this story is common happy ending.

>>It is because this story has a common happy ending.
 Harry is not common.

>>Correct!
 Young Harry Potter has suffered abuse.

>>Young Harry Potter has been abused.

>>Or: Young Harry Potter suffered from his abusive family members.
 In addition, seven years his life was threatened.

>>In addition, he was threatened for seven years.
 After the war of Voldemort, he has some side effects.

>>After his encounter with Voldemort, he felt something wrong with his body. 

>>Or: His encounter with Voldemort left a bad effects on him.
 If he does not overcome the after-effects, he continues to suffer.

>>Correct!
 This story is not realistic.

>>Correct!