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2014-02-03 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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[What is the importance of having an organization?] I am belong to the Korea Administrative attoney's organization and the Korea real estate agent's organization. The organizations provide me sense of belongings and many friends. Also, I can have a lots of information of my business.

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[What is the importance of having an organization?]
I am belong to the Korea Administrative attoney\'s organization and the Korea real estate agent\'s organization.
>>I belong to the Korea Administrative Attorney\'s organization and the Korea Real Estate Agent\'s organization.
The organizations provide me sense of belongings and many friends.
>>These organizations and my friends provide me my need to belong.
Also, I can have a lots of information of my business.

>>Also, I can have lots of information about my business.

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