Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there again Ms. [Name]!
Well, that\'s really a big difference when it comes to Chinese New Year and Korean New year.
My country also celebrates Lunar New Year but only for one day.
We had a holiday on Friday actually.
But we do follow the Chinese New year.
It\'s quite different from Korean Seollal since I think Chinese New Year is like a festival.
With a lot of dancing dragons, foods, and festivities.
Really quite different.
But anyway, whatever the differences are, I am very sure that every Koreans and Chinese\'s is enjoying their New Year.
I hope to hear from you tomorrow.
See you!
Take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
How are you?
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I was little tired but I\'m better.
>> I was a little tired but I\'m better/good.
The topic is good.
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How do Koreans celebrate Lunar New Year (Seollal) differently from Chinese?
I don\'t konw Chinese\'s Lunar New Year exactly but when I went to the China town in Shingarpore, it was very crowded.
>> I don\'t know exactly the Chinese Lunar New Year but when I went to China Town in Singapore, it was very crowded.
They bought foods and present.
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It looked like a festival.
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In Korea, we eat Deokguk that is soup.
>> In Korea, we are eating Deokguk which is a soup.
It makes by white rice cake like coin.
>> It is made by white rice cake which looks like a coin.
We put in egg, beaf, laver and so on.
>> We put some egg, beef, liver, and so on.
We alos have a memorial service for ancestor.
>> We also have a memorial service for our ancestors.
This is because we make a lot of foods like Jeons(pancake?), meats, fishes, vegetables and so on.
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We meet many family members for a long time.
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We can share our news.
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It is special.
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However it is not just good for women because household is alomst hers.
>> However, it is not good for women because they mostly do the household chores on their own.
These days many men help women but it is not enough.
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>> or: These days, many men are helping the women but it is not enough.
First of all, most family gather in the husband\'s house.
>> First of all, most family members gather in the husband\'s house.
And then women go to their parents house.
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Actually it is different from door to door.
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>> or: Actually it is different from one case to another.
See you on Monday.
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