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I dream of having a big aquarium someday.
Because i saw an big aquarium.And there were many corals.
So I dream of having a big aquarium.
강사 첨삭
Hello Tom!
Oh! Long time no see! Thank you for sending an essay today.
I also want to have a big aquarium but I think it will be difficult.
How was your holiday? Your sentences are good! Keep it up!
See you in class.
Teacher Nina
I dream of having a big aquarium someday.
>> Did you mean: I dream to have a big aquarium someday.
>> OR: I wish to have a big aquarium someday.
Because i saw an big aquarium.
>> It is because I saw a big aquarium.
>> OR: I was able to see a big aquarium.
And there were many corals.
>> Correct!
So I dream of having a big aquarium.
>> Correct!
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