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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there once again Ms. [Name]!
Oh my. Why thank you for the offer.
I really appreciate it.
I want to go and visit Korea as soon as possible but my schedule does not permit me.
How I wish I can go to the places that you mentioned with you.
I want to experience a lot of things in your country.
I want to eat also many Korean foods.
But don\'t worry, I will call you if I am already there. kkk
And if you would want also to visit here in the Philippines, I would also love to be your guide.
We can go to may places that you want. I can also adjust on that. haha.
See you gain tomorrow!
Enjoy your day!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Whenever I go to work, I\'m always very busy.
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However when I check today\'s topic, I\'m good because I can imagine vacation with you. Hahaha
>> However, when I checked today\'s topic, I feel good because I can imagine having a vacation with you. Hahaha
If I\'m going to your country on vacation, what should I be sure to see and do?
I hope you use Gimhae airport because it is near my house but it is no matter whatever it is.
>> I hope you will use Gimhae airport because it is near my house, but it does not matter wherever it is.
We can meet Seoul or Pusan thoes are bigest city in my country.
>> We can meet in Seoul or Pusan since those are the biggest cities in my country.
But I\'d like to invite you to my house.
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What is your favorite Korea food?
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I can cook for you. Hahaha.
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My town is small but I know about here well so I can be guide for you.
>> My town is small but I know here well so I can your guide.
You can talk a walk around Sangrim forest that is very beautiful.
>> You can take a walk around Sangrim forest which is very beautiful.
You can also go hiking MT.
>> You can also go hiking at MT.
Jiri that is different each season.
>> Jiri is different every season.
If you want to go somewhere such as shopping center, movie theatre and so on, I can go with you.
>> If you want to go somewhere such as the shopping center, movie theater and so on, I can go with you.
Most of all, I want to respect your opinion because you are guest.
>> Most of all, I want to respect your opinion because you are the guest.
I\'ll be happy if you share about your vacation plan in my country.
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I can adjust that. See you on Wednesday.
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