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2014-02-05 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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What would you do if you had to travel to a country where its people don't know how to speak neither your language nor English? Wow! This situation is very difficult. But I believe that we can communicate with each other. I heard our ancestor communicate with picture or body language long time ago. Although it is not easy, we may share our thinking. We can't share our opinion deeply. At this time, we can use good system that is a translation machine. You Know there are a lot of great translation system so we can use it. Futhermore, all people use cellphone everyday. It has good dictionary so if talking is difficult we can use it, too. I think I have to study English continually. I'd like to be exposured English reading, listening, writing and speaking. Way to go!! Thank you:)

강사 첨삭

Hello Ms. [Name]!

Good afternoon to you!

Most of my students also answered body language and or gestures are the best thing to do when people cannot communicate with each other.

And most people would do that to.

I was in the same situation before.

It\'s actually hard.

And why not!

The translation thingy is also a good idea.
I haven\'t thought about that. hahaha

But it\'s really a more way to go!

Anyway, thanks for your time today Ms. [Name].
Have a great day!


Always,

Kathrine ^^


What would you do if you had to travel to a country where its people don\'t know how to speak neither your language nor English?

Wow! This situation is very difficult.

>> correct!

But I believe that we can communicate with each other.

>>  correct!

I heard our ancestor communicate with picture or body language long time ago.

>>  correct!

Although it is not easy, we may share our thinking.

>>  correct!

We can\'t share our opinion deeply.

>>  correct!

At this time, we can use good system that is a translation machine.

>>  At this time, we can use a good system which is a translation machine.

You Know there are a lot of great translation system so we can use it.

>> correct!

Futhermore, all people use cellphone everyday.

>>  correct (spelling correction-furthermore)

It has good dictionary so if talking is difficult we can use it, too.
>>  It has a good dictionary so if talking difficult
I think I have to study English continually.

>>  correct!

I\'d like to be exposured English reading, listening, writing and speaking.

>>  I\'d like to be exposed to English reading, listening, writing and speaking.

Way to go!! Thank you:)

>>  correct!

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