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2014-02-05 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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There is no amusement park in Je-Ju. But if I go to other cities, I'll go to the amusement park once 40 month. I hate a amusement park. And I don't know the cost of amusement park.

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Hello Tom! I admire you for sending an essay today. You are really a diligent student. With your effort and determination in studying, I can see some improvements. Great! Oh I see! We also don\'t have an amusement park here in my city. I\'m just curious, you told me that you hate going to the amusement park. Why? Can you please tell it in class. See you! I am excited to hear your marvelous sentences today. Take Care! Have a great! Teacher Nina   There is no amusement park in Je-Ju. >> Correct! >> OR: We don\'t have amusement parks here in Jeju. But if I go to other cities, I\'ll go to the amusement park once 40 month. >> Did you mean: But if I go to other cities, I will go to the amusement park.  I visit an amusement park once in forty months.  ( Please explain this sentence to me later in class. ^^) >> OR: If I go to other cities, I will visit an amusement park. I hate a amusement park. >> Did you mean: I hate going to the amusement park.And I don\'t know the cost of amusement park. >> And I don\'t know the cost of the entrance fee in the amusement park. >> OR: I don\'t have any idea about the fee in the amusement park.

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