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2014-02-06 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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I agree with the statement that someone's appearance reflects one's personality. But it applies when people are older than 50. When people are young, youth may hide their ugliness of their personality. However as they become older and compile their evilness, their appearance finally changes according to their personality. And I think that changes come out when people are as old as 50. In opposite, we can often see the people who are very old but look elegant and benign. Actually I'm trying to be positive and cheerful, so I would be super beautiful in my 50's. :) It's a joke.:) See you tomorrow :) Bye :)

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름] my dear!!! That was hilarious~~~ haha! I loved the joke below. :) However, I believe that jokes are half meant most of the time. Am I right? hahaha! I\'ll see you soon~~ T.Kristel- I agree with the statement that someone\'s appearance reflects one\'s personality. >>  I agree to the statement that someone\'s appearance reflects one\'s personality.But it applies when people are older than 50. >> CORRECT!! When people are young, youth may hide their ugliness of their personality. >> When people are young, their youth may hide the ugliness of their personality. However as they become older and compile their evilness, their appearance finally changes according to their personality. >> However, as they become older and their evilness are accumulated, their appearances change according to their personalities. And I think that changes come out when people are as old as 50. >> CORRECT!! In opposite, we can often see the people who are very old but look elegant and benign. >> On the contrary, we can often see people who are very old but look elegant and benign/sophisticated. Actually I\'m trying to be positive and cheerful, so I would be super beautiful in my 50\'s. :) It\'s a joke.:)>> CORRECT!! CORRECT!! See you tomorrow :) Bye :) >> CORRECT!!

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