homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there Sir [이름]!!!
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
It is great to know your opinion about this topic.
You are brilliant!
I am very happy that you are sharing your perspective.
Just be careful on how you phrase your sentences.^^
Well enjoy the rest of your time.
Eat well and please rest well too.
See you tomorrow.
~Teacher Mona
*What makes life worth living for you?
I think that\'s very profound question.
>>I think that\'s a very profound question.
Life is given only once to us.
>>Life is given to us only once.
So it\'s very noble.
>>Correct!
>>So it\'s very valuable.
It\'s very important how to use the time that is given to us.
>>It\'s very important how we use the time given us.
We don\'t know exactly when will die.
>>We don\'t know exactly when will we die.
So I think it makes me worth think that to thank I just being to live.
>>So I think I am just thankful that I am alive.
I can\'t move freely but I am thanksful to the lord.
>>I can\'t move freely but I am thankful to the Lord.
Because I can think,talk,hear,see,eat,,
>>Because I can think, talk, hear see and eat.
most of all is studying with nice teacher Mona!
>>Most of all I am studying with a nice teacher Mona!
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