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2014-02-07 · 첨삭 강사 Mona

학생이 쓴 원문

*What makes life worth living for you? I think that's very profound question. Life is given only once to us. So it's very noble. It's very important how to use the time that is given to us. We don't know exactly when will die. So I think it makes me worth think that to thank I just being to live. I can't move freely but I am thanksful to the lord. Because I can think,talk,hear,see,eat,, most of all is studying with nice teacher Mona!

강사 첨삭

Hello there Sir [이름]!!!

Thank you so much for doing your homework.

It is great to know your opinion about this topic.

You are brilliant!

I am very happy that you are sharing your perspective.

Just be careful on how you phrase your sentences.^^

Well enjoy the rest of your time.

Eat well and please rest well too.

See you tomorrow.

~Teacher Mona

 

*What makes life worth living for you?

I think that\'s very profound question.
>>I think that\'s a very profound question.

Life is given only once to us.
>>Life is given to us only once.

So it\'s very noble.
>>Correct!

>>So it\'s very valuable.

It\'s very important how to use the time that is given to us.

>>It\'s very important how we use the time given us.
We don\'t know exactly when will die.

>>We don\'t know exactly when will we die.
So I think it makes me worth think that to thank I just being to live.

>>So I think I am just thankful that I am alive.
I can\'t move freely but I am thanksful to the lord.

>>I can\'t move freely but  I am thankful to the Lord.

Because I can think,talk,hear,see,eat,,

>>Because I can think, talk, hear see and eat.
most of all is studying with nice teacher Mona!

>>Most of all I am studying with a nice teacher Mona!

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