Homework.

2014-02-08 · 첨삭 강사 Barbara

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Nowadays I am interested in Beyonce's songs. She released new album eariler this year. As soon as I listened, I became to love it. All of her songs are good. But the best is 'pretty hurt' And 'flawless' is better than others. Also 'Jealous' is good. I really like to listen to them.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

Thank you so much for doing your homework.

I am very glad that you are confident when we are doing the free talking class.

Just do your best always okay!

I am very proud of you.

Please rest well okay and eat well before going to work tomorrow.

Well sleep well and have a great night.

See you on Monday!

Happy Weekends!

~Teacher Theresa

Nowadays I am interested in Beyonce\'s songs.
>> Correct.
She released new album eariler this year.
>>
She released a new album earlier this year.
As soon as I listened, I became to love it.
>> As soon as I listened to her songs, I became to love it.
All of her songs are good.
>> Correct.
But the best is \'pretty hurt\'
>> Correct.
And \'flawless\' is better than others.
>> Correct.
Also \'Jealous\' is good.
>> Correct.
I really like to listen to them.

>> I really like to listen to her songs.

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