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2010-12-30 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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1. My best friend is Jee-Young. I have known her for 15 years. 2. Having known her this long, Jee-Young would never tell a lie. 3. I covet to have physical strength. Because I want to do many things, but I usually tend to get tired easily.

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Hi [이름], I'm so impressed with your home work !! Yehey, keep up the great job. See you tomorrow, T. Verna  1. My best friend is Jee-Young. I have known her for 15 years. >> Correct >> My best friend's name is Jee-Young, I have known her for 15 years. 2. Having known her this long, Jee-Young would never tell a lie. >> Correct3. I covet to have physical strength. >>  CorrectBecause I want to do many things, but I usually tend to get tired easily. >> correct >> I covet to be stronger so I can do many things because today I tend to get tired easily. 

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