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2014-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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What is the best quality you've inherited from either of your parents? I think DNA is very surprising because it influenced their descendant. Especially, we can see children are similar appearance or character with their parents. In my case, I am like my mother about appearance and my character is like my father. They are very diligent and energetic. My parents are the sixties but they don’t take a rest. They hard-work everyday. I worry about their health. In my case, I have a energy in my work. I want to improve my every skill. I sometime have a stress for it but I can’t it. This is because it is from my parents. I was very busy during weekend. I met my friends of my graduate school. We had delicious food. It is fry small octopus. it was very hot. After lunch we went shopping in outlet. We seperate each becuae our shopping type is different. And then we ate dinner in one of friend house. We had a barbecue. Our talking is not end easily until deep night. I came back home late.

강사 첨삭

Another great week Ms. [Name]!

Thanks for our class today though you feel tired from your weekend\'s activities.
But I can see that you had fun during the weekend.

Well, everybody can inherited characters or feature from their parents.
And mostly these characters and features also reflect who your parents are.
And since you said your parents are hard-working people then you are also a hard-working person.

Isn\'t that right? ^^

Anyway, thank you again and see you tomorrow!
Take care and have a great Monday!


Always,
Kathrine ^^


What is the best quality you\'ve inherited from either of your parents?

I think DNA is very surprising because it influenced their descendant.

>>  I think DNA is very surprising because it influences the descendant.

Especially, we can see children are similar appearance or character with their parents.

>>  Especially, we can see children with the similar appearance or character with their parents.

In my case, I am like my mother about appearance and my character is like my father.

>>  In my case, my feature is like my mother and my character is like my father.

They are very diligent and energetic.

>>  correct!

My parents are the sixties but they don’t take a rest.

>>  My parents are in their sixties but they don\'t take a rest.

They hard-work everyday.

>>  They are working hard everyday.

I worry about their health.

>>  I am worried about their health.

In my case, I have a energy in my work.

>>  In my case, I have an energy at work.

I want to improve my every skill.

>>  I want to improve every skills that I have.

 I sometime have a stress for it but I can’t it.

>>  I am sometimes stressed about it.

This is because it is from my parents.
>>  correct!
I was very busy during weekend.

>>  I was very busy during the weekend.

 I met my friends of my graduate school.

>>  I met my friends in the graduate school./

We had delicious food.

>> We had a delicious food.

It is fry small octopus.

>>  It was a small-fry octopus.

it was very hot.

>>  correct! (capitalization)

After lunch we went shopping in outlet.

>>  After lunch, we went shopping in an outlet center.

We seperate each becuae our shopping type is different.

>>  We were separated because our shopping style is different.

And then we ate dinner in one of friend house.

>>  And then we ate dinner in one of our friend\'s house.

We had a barbecue.

>>  correct!

Our talking is not end easily until deep night.

>>  We were not able to end our conversation until late in the evening.

I came back home late.

>>  correct!

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