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2014-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

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What would be your "dream home"? Try to describe it in detail. DId I told you about my new home. This will be build after 2 years. There are three rooms and two bathroom. One bathroom is in bigest room. There is dress room too in there. It is my dream home. Hahaha. We already finished contract. I can't buy big one. It is most small in apartment complex. However I'm good. My mother said althought the house is small, the first house is best. That's right. We have to wait for two years and saving money. And then I'd like to change my house after 10 years. I want to get more 10 pyeong. I want to upgrade bathtub quality and I hope more large kichen. I think it is important not only structure but also furniture. I'd like to have nice sofa, desk, chair, bookshelf, piano and so on. My husband hope new computer, printer, TV, stereo and so on. My husband want to build house but I prefer apartment. My husband want to grow cat and dog and I think apartment is more convenient.

강사 첨삭

Another great week Ms. [Name]!

Well, congratulations in your new house!

I\'m pretty sure that it will be very beautiful and according to what you have planned.

I wish you luck!

See you again tomorrow.
Thanks for the time!

Take care!

Always, 
Kathrine ^^

What would be your \"dream home\"? Try to describe it in detail.
DId I told you about my new home. 

>>  Did I tell you about my new home?

This will be build after 2 years.

>>  This will be built after 2 years.

There are three rooms and two bathroom.

>>  There are 3 rooms and 2 bathrooms.

One bathroom is in bigest room.

>>  One bathroom is in the biggest room.

There is dress room too in there.

>>   There is a dress room in there too.

It is my dream home. Hahaha.

>>  correct!

We already finished contract.

>>  We already finished the contract.

I can\'t buy big one.

>>  I can\'t buy a big one.

It is most small in apartment complex.

>>  It is the smallest in the apartment complex.

However I\'m good.

>>  correct!

>> or; However, it\'s already good for me.

My mother said althought the house is small, the first house is best.

>>  My mother also said that the house is small and the first house is the best.

That\'s right.

>>  correct!

We have to wait for two years and saving money.

>>  We have to wait for two years and save some money.

And then I\'d like to change my house after 10 years.

>>  correct!

I want to get more 10 pyeong.

>>  correct!

I want to upgrade bathtub quality and I hope more large kichen.

>>  I wan tot upgrade the bathtub in a good quality and I hope to have a larger kitchen.

I think it is important not only structure but also furniture.

>>  I think it is important not only the structure but also the furniture.

I\'d like to have nice sofa, desk, chair, bookshelf, piano and so on.

>>  I\'d like to have a nice sofa, desk, chairs, a bookshelf, a piano and so on.

My husband hope new computer, printer, TV, stereo and so on.

>>  My husband hopes to have a new computer, a printer, TV and stereo and so on.

My husband want to build house but I prefer apartment.

>>  My husband wants to build a house but I prefer an apartment.

My husband want to grow cat and dog and I think apartment is more convenient.

>>  My husband wants to grow a cat and a dog and I think an apartment is more convenient.

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