Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Another great week Ms. [Name]!
Well, congratulations in your new house!
I\'m pretty sure that it will be very beautiful and according to what you have planned.
I wish you luck!
See you again tomorrow.
Thanks for the time!
Take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
What would be your \"dream home\"? Try to describe it in detail.
DId I told you about my new home.
>> Did I tell you about my new home?
This will be build after 2 years.
>> This will be built after 2 years.
There are three rooms and two bathroom.
>> There are 3 rooms and 2 bathrooms.
One bathroom is in bigest room.
>> One bathroom is in the biggest room.
There is dress room too in there.
>> There is a dress room in there too.
It is my dream home. Hahaha.
>> correct!
We already finished contract.
>> We already finished the contract.
I can\'t buy big one.
>> I can\'t buy a big one.
It is most small in apartment complex.
>> It is the smallest in the apartment complex.
However I\'m good.
>> correct!
>> or; However, it\'s already good for me.
My mother said althought the house is small, the first house is best.
>> My mother also said that the house is small and the first house is the best.
That\'s right.
>> correct!
We have to wait for two years and saving money.
>> We have to wait for two years and save some money.
And then I\'d like to change my house after 10 years.
>> correct!
I want to get more 10 pyeong.
>> correct!
I want to upgrade bathtub quality and I hope more large kichen.
>> I wan tot upgrade the bathtub in a good quality and I hope to have a larger kitchen.
I think it is important not only structure but also furniture.
>> I think it is important not only the structure but also the furniture.
I\'d like to have nice sofa, desk, chair, bookshelf, piano and so on.
>> I\'d like to have a nice sofa, desk, chairs, a bookshelf, a piano and so on.
My husband hope new computer, printer, TV, stereo and so on.
>> My husband hopes to have a new computer, a printer, TV and stereo and so on.
My husband want to build house but I prefer apartment.
>> My husband wants to build a house but I prefer an apartment.
My husband want to grow cat and dog and I think apartment is more convenient.
>> My husband wants to grow a cat and a dog and I think an apartment is more convenient.
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