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Hello Tom!
Happy Monday! Thank you for doing your essay homework.
I also like Jupiter because of its color.
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Teacher Nina
My favorite planet is Jupiter.
>> Correct!
Because it is very big and colorful.
>> Correct!
>> OR: It is because it is very big and colorful.
>> OR: I like it because it is very big and colorful.
Originally, I like Jupiter type planet. Jupiter has a lot of satellite.
>> Did you mean: Honestly speaking, I like it because it has a lot of satellites.
>> OR: Ever since, I like Jupiter because of its satellites.
One of them are Ganymede,call is to Europa and Io
>> One of them are Ganymeded, Callisto. Europa and IO.
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