Homework;)
학생이 쓴 원문
When I'm feeling down, I usually listen to the music that makes me excited.
Sometimes I just listen to it, but I also sing along the songs.
Singing in loud voice cheers me up when I'm feeling down.
I think I'm not the only one who feels that way because there are a lot of 'noraebang'(karaoke) in Korea and many Koreans love to go there without distinction of age or sex.
In addition, I also meet my friends or watch comedy movies when I feel upset.
Oh, and I eat a lot when I'm feeling down which I think is really bad for my diet and my health.
I thought I was not capable of dealing my anger however as I write about what I do to put away my anger, I realize I do know how to deal with it.
I think I know myself better now. Thank you, Kristel;) Bye:)
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름] my dear!!
We all know how to deal with things ourselves but sometimes we just
really need someone else to remind us of those. :) kkk Most of the time,
we are in denial of things that we think aren\'t good for us. :)
Keep being positive and happy!
T.Kristel-
When I\'m feeling down, I usually listen to the music that makes me excited.
>> CORRECT!!Sometimes I just listen to it, but I also sing along the songs.
>> CORRECT!!Singing in loud voice cheers me up when I\'m feeling down.
>> CORRECT!!I think I\'m not the only one who feels that way because there are a lot of \'noraebang\'(karaoke) in Korea and many Koreans love to go there without distinction of age or sex.
>> CORRECT!!
>> I think I\'m not the only one who feels that way because there are a lot of \'noraebang\'(karaoke) in Korea and many Koreans love to go there regardless of age or sex.In addition, I also meet my friends or watch comedy movies when I feel upset.
>> CORRECT!!Oh, and I eat a lot when I\'m feeling down which I think is really bad for my diet and my health.
>> CORRECT!!I thought I was not capable of dealing my anger however as I write about what I do to put away my anger, I realize I do know how to deal with it.
>> CORRECT!!I think I know myself better now. Thank you, Kristel;) Bye:)
>> CORRECT!! CORRECT!! CORRECT!!
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