Homework

2014-02-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jennifer

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. I does not agree with it because our family talks more when we are watching a funny TV show. And that is same with friends too. If I have met some person first time, we can watch a funny TV show and talk like we are friends. Also TV can stop fighting with friends.

강사 첨삭

Wow! You are insightful.. I am just not too happy with \"I doesn\'t\". Perhaps, this mistake is just a typographical error. Anyway, please check the corrections and if you have questions, ask me in class, in about a minute.. T. Jennifer   HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.I does not agree with it because our family talks more when we are watching a funny TV show. >> I do not agree with it because our family talks more when we are watching a funny TV show. And that is same with friends too. >> And that is the same with my friends too. >> And the same thing happens with my friends too.  If I have met some person first time, we can watch a funny TV show and talk like we are friends. >> When we meet someone the first time, we can watch a funny TV show and talk like we were friends. >>OR: I think watching a funny TV show can break the ice between two strangers.  Also TV can stop fighting with friends. >> Also, TV can stop fighting among friends. >> Also, TV can divert everyone\'s attention from a conflict.  

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