homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Tom!
Good Tuesday to you! It\'s a nice day for me, how about you?
You did a great job! You were able to compose great sentences.^^
Keep it up! Please tell me more about your ideas in class.
See you! Have a great night!
Teacher Nina
I\'ll go to Mars.
>> Correct!
It is because, that planet is very marvelous.
>> It is because the planet is marvelous.
Maybe, the aliens live in Mars.
>> Correct!
I want to contact them.
>> Did you mean: I want to have a contact with them.
>> OR: I want to see them.
And I\'ll be the richest man.
>> Correct!
Because, when I tell the story about alien, government may give the money.
>> It is because if I tell the story about the aliens, the government might give me some money.
>> OR: It is because if I share the story about the aliens, I might receive some money.
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