homework
학생이 쓴 원문
*Are you happy / confident with your looks? Why or why not?
Yes, I am happy :)
I think it isn't important to be visible.
Many people look beautiful but they might be poor on the inside.
So we have to develope inner beauty.
Such as my good teacher Mona!
She has a heart of gold.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Sir [이름]^^
Thank you for doing your homework^^
And thank you for the compliment. kkk:)
I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet all your points.
If you have some questions, just feel free to ask me in our class.
Enjoy the rest of your day and take care^^
Teacher Mona
Yes, I am happy :)>>Correct!
I think it isn\'t important to be visible.
>>Correct!
Many people look beautiful but they might be poor on the inside.
>>Many epople look beautiful but ugly inside.
So we have to develope inner beauty.
>>Correct!
>>So we have to develop inner beauty.
Such as my good teacher Mona!
>>Correct!
She has a heart of gold.
>>Correct!
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