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2014-02-12 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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Composition making! If you could change one major historical event, what would it be? I have gone to the Japanese occupation. Japanese occupation of Korea is a painful history. If that were not the Japanese occupation, Korea might have peaceful. South Korea and Japan have a bad feeling. Japan has not apologized to South Korea. So the offense is more deep-seated periods. I want to clear the history of shame.

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Hi there! :) Well, this conflict has not yet been resolved for a long time already. Each country has it\'s own pride that is why no one is apologizing. However, I am hoping that one day, it will be resolved. And your country\'s history will also be cleared. See you later! T. Shanee ^^ Composition making! If you could change one major historical event, what would it be? I have gone to the Japanese occupation.  >>  It would have been the Japanese occupation.  Japanese occupation of Korea is a painful history.  >>  The Japanese occupation in Korea was a painful history.  If that were not the Japanese occupation, Korea might have peaceful.  >>  If it was not because of the Japanese occupation, Korea might have been peaceful.  South Korea and Japan have a bad feeling.  >> South Korea and Japan have ill feelings towards each other.  Japan has not apologized to South Korea.  >>  correct!  So the offense is more deep-seated periods. >>  So the offense became more deep-seated as period went by. I want to clear the history of shame. >>  correct!^^ 

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