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Composition making!
If you could change one major historical event, what would it be?
I have gone to the Japanese occupation.
Japanese occupation of Korea is a painful history.
If that were not the Japanese occupation, Korea might have peaceful.
South Korea and Japan have a bad feeling.
Japan has not apologized to South Korea.
So the offense is more deep-seated periods.
I want to clear the history of shame.
강사 첨삭
Hi there! :)
Well, this conflict has not yet been resolved for a long time already.
Each country has it\'s own pride that is why no one is apologizing.
However, I am hoping that one day, it will be resolved. And your country\'s history will also be cleared.
See you later!
T. Shanee ^^
Composition making! If you could change one major historical event, what would it be? I have gone to the Japanese occupation.
>> It would have been the Japanese occupation. Japanese occupation of Korea is a painful history.
>> The Japanese occupation in Korea was a painful history. If that were not the Japanese occupation, Korea might have peaceful.
>> If it was not because of the Japanese occupation, Korea might have been peaceful. South Korea and Japan have a bad feeling.
>> South Korea and Japan have ill feelings towards each other. Japan has not apologized to South Korea.
>> correct! So the offense is more deep-seated periods.
>> So the offense became more deep-seated as period went by.
I want to clear the history of shame.
>> correct!^^
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