homework
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What makes home special to you ,do you value it
-A home is very value for me.
It gives me a place of recharge, and I feel happy with my family at home.
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What makes home special to you ,do you value it
-A home is very value for me.
>> Home is a very valuable place for me.
It gives me a place of recharge, and I feel happy with my family at home.
>> It is a place where I can recharge my energy. And I feel happy with my family at home.
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