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2014-02-13 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1.c 2.c 3.c 4.c 5.b 6.b 7.c 8.a 9.b 10.b Few month ago,a helicopter crashed into Samseong-dong Trade Center. An account book and captain both died. More than two billion won property damage. It is one of the most biggest accident of Korea history.

강사 첨삭

A cool Thursday afternoon to you Tom! Oh! It\'s already the fourth day of the week! I think you are excited for the weekend, am I right? I\'m sorry to hear about that accident in Korea. You did a pretty nice job with your homework. I think you are confused with the articles. Please go over the corrections below and if you have any questions, ask me in class. Teacher Nina   1.c >> B2.c >> Correct! 3.c >> B4.c >> Correct! 5.b >> Correct! 6.b >> Correct! 7.c >> 8.a >> C9.b >> A10.b >> Correct! Few month ago,a helicopter crashed into Samseong-dong Trade Center. >> Few months ago, a helicopter crashed into Samseong-dong Trade Center.An account book and captain both died. >> Did you mean: An accountant and captain died.More than two billion won property damage. >> The damage of the propery costs more than two billion won. >> OR: The damage costs more than two billion won. It is one of the most biggest accident of Korea history. >> Did you mean: It was one of the biggest accident in Korean history.  >> OR:  It was one of the major accidents in Korean history.

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