homework
학생이 쓴 원문
We don't give a chocolate to my parents.
We give a chocolate to my friend in Korea.
So i'll fix your question.
I think we should do to make Valentine's Day,special for our parents.
Because it cement our friendship.
강사 첨삭
Happy Valentine\'s Day Tom!
And of course Happy Friday too!!
Yipee! It\'s the end of the line again. Are you happy today?
What did you do to make this day special for your parents?Thank you for sending in your homework. You did a very good job with your composition.
I can see that you are getting used with the language. Keep on writing!
I encourage you to be careful with the words you use. You can do it!
See you in class!Teacher Nina
We don\'t give a chocolate to my parents.
>> Did you mean: I don\'t give chocolates to my parents. We give a chocolate to my friend in Korea.
>> I give a chocolate to my friend in Korea.
>> OR: I give chocolates to my friends in Korea. So i\'ll fix your question.
>> Did you mean: I\'ll change your question. ( If you mean fix, there is something wrong with the question. )
I think we should do to make Valentine\'s Day,special for our parents.
>> I think we should make Valentine\'s Day special for our parents. Because it cement our friendship.
>> Did you mean: It is because it cements the friendship we build with other people. ( Can you please explain this sentence in class? )
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