Homework
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Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place? Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
It is different depend on person. If they can adapt and adjust in any situation, they can live anywhere. But Someone have to move often b. I think all people can adapt any circumstance. Also if they have lived for four years, they may not want to move anywhere. Hahaha Because already they familiar to it so all thing is convenient and easy. Finally, people don't want to change in new place. On the other hand, we need change because it gives us good energy. I prefer change and I think I need change but I know it is not easy because I already now and here is comfortable.
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Great Saturday evening Ms. [Name]!
How was your day today?
I hope you are enjoying your weekend.
Well, for me, YES, I am enjoying my weekend. haha.
It is actually 10 in the evening in my country but I am surfing the internet and I don\'t have anything to do that is why I decided to do your compositions.
Anyway, I do agree with what you have mentioned.
We also need changes in our lives.
It will give us new environment, new energy and the new will to do the things that we have to do.
I have this student who is changing and transferring from one place to another after 2 years.
She is a soldier that is why she needs to do that.
She is married and she have never lived with her husband but they have a son already.
Her husband is just visiting her every weekend.
I couldn\'t imagine how she bears that.
But she said she loves transeferring from one place to another.
She loves to be in a new environment and happy to meet new things.
I guess you have the same idea why you also love changes in your life.
Well, I have said enough.. hahaha.
See you then on Monday Ms. [Name]!
Enjoy the last day of the weekend!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Some people spend their entire lives in one place.
>> correct!
Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate.
>> Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even the climate.
>> Others are moving a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even the climate.
Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place? Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
It is different depend on person.
>> It is different depending on the person.
>> or: It is different as it depends on the person.
If they can adapt and adjust in any situation, they can live anywhere.
>> correct!
But Someone have to move often b.
>> But someone has to move often.
I think all people can adapt any circumstance.
>> I think people can adopt in any circumstances.
Also if they have lived for four years, they may not want to move anywhere. Hahaha
>>Also, if they have lived in the same place for 4 years, they may not want to move anywhere. Hahaha
Because already they familiar to it so all thing is convenient and easy.
>> Because they are already familiar to it so all things are convenient and easy.
Finally, people don\'t want to change in new place.
>> Finally, people don\'t want to transfer in a new place.
On the other hand, we need change because it gives us good energy.
>> correct!
I prefer change and I think I need change but I know it is not easy because I already now and here is comfortable.
>> I prefer change and I think I need change but I know it is not easy because I already now here and it is also comfortable to live here.
How was your day today?
I hope you are enjoying your weekend.
Well, for me, YES, I am enjoying my weekend. haha.
It is actually 10 in the evening in my country but I am surfing the internet and I don\'t have anything to do that is why I decided to do your compositions.
Anyway, I do agree with what you have mentioned.
We also need changes in our lives.
It will give us new environment, new energy and the new will to do the things that we have to do.
I have this student who is changing and transferring from one place to another after 2 years.
She is a soldier that is why she needs to do that.
She is married and she have never lived with her husband but they have a son already.
Her husband is just visiting her every weekend.
I couldn\'t imagine how she bears that.
But she said she loves transeferring from one place to another.
She loves to be in a new environment and happy to meet new things.
I guess you have the same idea why you also love changes in your life.
Well, I have said enough.. hahaha.
See you then on Monday Ms. [Name]!
Enjoy the last day of the weekend!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Some people spend their entire lives in one place.
>> correct!
Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate.
>> Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even the climate.
>> Others are moving a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even the climate.
Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place? Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
It is different depend on person.
>> It is different depending on the person.
>> or: It is different as it depends on the person.
If they can adapt and adjust in any situation, they can live anywhere.
>> correct!
But Someone have to move often b.
>> But someone has to move often.
I think all people can adapt any circumstance.
>> I think people can adopt in any circumstances.
Also if they have lived for four years, they may not want to move anywhere. Hahaha
>>Also, if they have lived in the same place for 4 years, they may not want to move anywhere. Hahaha
Because already they familiar to it so all thing is convenient and easy.
>> Because they are already familiar to it so all things are convenient and easy.
Finally, people don\'t want to change in new place.
>> Finally, people don\'t want to transfer in a new place.
On the other hand, we need change because it gives us good energy.
>> correct!
I prefer change and I think I need change but I know it is not easy because I already now and here is comfortable.
>> I prefer change and I think I need change but I know it is not easy because I already now here and it is also comfortable to live here.
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