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What is the difference between Valentine's day and White Day? Why do Koreans celebrate these two differently comparing to other countries?
I heard if we confess love to lover in Valentine's day, we can accomplish it. However I don't like it this event. Hahah. In Korean, woman give chocolate to man in Valentine's Day and man give candy to woman in White Day. These day is very meaningful because we can express our love. Sometime we need to confirm our love. Bye the way, I heard very serious news. Patriot An jung-geun were sentenced to death in Valentine's day. The day was very historical day. White Day was made by Japanese who is baker. He want to sell candy. There are many days in Korea. April 14th is Black day so singles eat Jajangmyean day. May 15th is Rose day so couple give and take rose each other. It's funny.
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One more hello Ms. [Name]!
Before I go to bed, I have to finish this last composition of yours. haha
Well, I guess, there are many ways how Koreans can express their love to each other and any other people so you have a lot of days to celebrate it. kkk
But I think everyday is Valentine\'s day because if you really love the person, these das are not important for a person to show his or her love to that person.
He or she will do it any day or even every day.
Isn\'t it? hahaha
Thanks for your thoughts Ms. [Name]!
Time for me now to go to bed.
Good night and see you next week!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
What is the difference between Valentine\'s day and White Day? Why do Koreans celebrate these two differently comparing to other countries?
I heard if we confess love to lover in Valentine\'s day, we can accomplish it.
>> I heard that if we confess our love to our lover in Valentine\'s day, we can accomplish it.
However I don\'t like it this event. Hahah.
>> However, I don\'t like this event. Hahaha.
In Korean, woman give chocolate to man in Valentine\'s Day and man give candy to woman in White Day.
>> In Korea, a woman gives chocolate to a man in Valentine\'s Day and the man gives candy to a man in White Day.
These day is very meaningful because we can express our love.
>> correct!
Sometime we need to confirm our love.
>> correct!
Bye the way, I heard very serious news.
>> By the way, I heard a very serious news.
Patriot An jung-geun were sentenced to death in Valentine\'s day.
>> Patriot An jung-geun was sentenced to death in Valentine\'s day.
The day was very historical day.
>> That day was a very historical day.
White Day was made by Japanese who is baker.
>> White Day was made by a Japanese who is a baker.
He want to sell candy.
>> He wants to sell candy.
There are many days in Korea.
>> correct!
April 14th is Black day so singles eat Jajangmyean day.
>> April 14th is the Black day so single people eat Jajangmyean day.
May 15th is Rose day so couple give and take rose each other.
>> May 15th is the Rose day so the couple give and take roses to each other.
It\'s funny.
>> correct!
Before I go to bed, I have to finish this last composition of yours. haha
Well, I guess, there are many ways how Koreans can express their love to each other and any other people so you have a lot of days to celebrate it. kkk
But I think everyday is Valentine\'s day because if you really love the person, these das are not important for a person to show his or her love to that person.
He or she will do it any day or even every day.
Isn\'t it? hahaha
Thanks for your thoughts Ms. [Name]!
Time for me now to go to bed.
Good night and see you next week!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
What is the difference between Valentine\'s day and White Day? Why do Koreans celebrate these two differently comparing to other countries?
I heard if we confess love to lover in Valentine\'s day, we can accomplish it.
>> I heard that if we confess our love to our lover in Valentine\'s day, we can accomplish it.
However I don\'t like it this event. Hahah.
>> However, I don\'t like this event. Hahaha.
In Korean, woman give chocolate to man in Valentine\'s Day and man give candy to woman in White Day.
>> In Korea, a woman gives chocolate to a man in Valentine\'s Day and the man gives candy to a man in White Day.
These day is very meaningful because we can express our love.
>> correct!
Sometime we need to confirm our love.
>> correct!
Bye the way, I heard very serious news.
>> By the way, I heard a very serious news.
Patriot An jung-geun were sentenced to death in Valentine\'s day.
>> Patriot An jung-geun was sentenced to death in Valentine\'s day.
The day was very historical day.
>> That day was a very historical day.
White Day was made by Japanese who is baker.
>> White Day was made by a Japanese who is a baker.
He want to sell candy.
>> He wants to sell candy.
There are many days in Korea.
>> correct!
April 14th is Black day so singles eat Jajangmyean day.
>> April 14th is the Black day so single people eat Jajangmyean day.
May 15th is Rose day so couple give and take rose each other.
>> May 15th is the Rose day so the couple give and take roses to each other.
It\'s funny.
>> correct!
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