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2014-02-17 · 첨삭 강사 Kristel

학생이 쓴 원문

I think it's necessary to know yourself because you can get through your hardships more easily if you know yourself better. In fact, in my case when I am in a devastating situation, I don't know what I can do to get out of that situation instantly. The things I wrote before to cool down my anger are things I can do when that devastating situation is being dull to me as time goes on. I don't know how to deal with myself when a devastating sitiation stands right in front of me. But when you know yourself entirely, you know what you can do to get out of the devastating situation and you would be get out of it in short time. And you can get back to or continue your normal life. I think in some aspects, knowing yourself means being confident about yourself. Bye;)

강사 첨삭

Hello there my dear [이름]!! It was very nice reading your composition. I could say that you are really good in writing. You always try to make sure that your sentences are correct! Two thumbs up for you. ^^ I would like to express my agreement to the opinions you\'ve stated here. One can never be confident of one\'s self if one doesn\'t know one\'s self completely. Let\'s talk more in class! I\'d be looking forward to it. T.Kristel- I think it\'s necessary to know yourself because you can get through your hardships more easily if you know yourself better. >> CORRECT!!In fact, in my case when I am in a devastating situation, I don\'t know what I can do to get out of that situation instantly. >> CORRECT!! The things I wrote before to cool down my anger are things I can do when that devastating situation is being dull to me as time goes on. >> CORRECT!! I don\'t know how to deal with myself when a devastating sitiation stands right in front of me. >> CORRECT!!But when you know yourself entirely, you know what you can do to get out of the devastating situation and you would be get out of it in short time. >>  But when you know yourself entirely (completely), you know what you can do to get out of the devastating situation and you would be out of it in a short time. And you can get back to or continue your normal life.>> CORRECT!!I think in some aspects, knowing yourself means being confident about yourself. >> CORRECT!!Bye;) >> CORRECT!!

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