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2014-02-18 · 첨삭 강사 Mona

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hi teacher I'm so gald for you that I had a good time to coversation. and, I said to you that I will told you the means of jumper in class. This means is a kind of jacket wearing for work in factory. we should be put on the jumper when we're working, and, there is not permitted to wear teh jeans,t-shirt and a primary color clothers which like a bule,red and yellow. because, these colores are meant to good,on-going and bad. home work 1.the --- I moved to the USA when I was 15 years old. 2.a --- I can spell as well as a most students 3.the --- He is the most famous actor I know 4. a -- Hurry up, We don't have a lot of time. 5.a --I live around here= I live in a neighborood. 6.a --- I don't know at all= I don't have a clue. 7. an -- I have an ieda! 8.The --The tea in my cup is too hot to drink. 9.the -- The US President lives in the White House. 10.a --My parents live in a white house.

강사 첨삭

A blissful Monday Sir [이름]!

Thank you so much for answering and posting your homework.

I also had so much fun studying with you.

You are an ideal student.^^

Here are some corrections I made for you.

Kindly check them out!

~~T. Mona

hi teacher

>>Hi teacher!
I\'m so gald for you that I had a good time to coversation.

>>I\'m so glad that I had a good time conversing with you.
and, I said to you that I will told you the means of jumper in class.

>>And I told you that I will tell the meaning of jumper in class.
This means is a kind of jacket wearing for work in factory.
>>A jumper is a kind of jacket people wear to work in a factory.
we should be put on the jumper when we\'re working,
and, there is not permitted to wear teh jeans,t-shirt and a primary color clothers which like a bule,red and yellow.
>>We should put on a jumper when we are working and we are not permitted to wear jeans and some primary colored clothes like blue, red and yellow.
because, these colores are meant to good,on-going and bad.

>>Because these colors mean good, on-going andbad.

home work
1.the --- I moved to the USA when I was 15 years old.

>>Correct!
2.a --- I can spell as well as a most students

>>no article
3.the --- He is the most famous actor I know

>> Correct!
4. a -- Hurry up, We don\'t have a lot of time.

>>Correct!
5.a --I live around here= I live in a neighborood.

>>the
6.a --- I don\'t know at all= I don\'t have a clue.

>> Correct!
7. an -- I have an ieda!

>>Correct!
8.The --The tea in my cup is too hot to drink.

>>Correct!
9.the -- The US President lives in the White House.

>>Correct!
10.a --My parents live in a white house.

>>Correct!

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