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2014-02-18 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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If you could do something dangerous just once with no risk what would you do? I'm a coward so I don't want to do dagerous things. I also don't like amusement park because there are a lot of dangerous rides. Actually I want to avoid it. However, if I have to do something dangerous, I will can do it. This is because there is no risk. At first, I will pray to God. Hahaha. And then I will close my eyes. KKK Today, we have the time that is division of works. So I know what I have to do in this year. I was very busy last year because my works were too heavy. I said to my supervisor about this. They understood my situation so my works are reduced. I'm happy and I may will live nicely in this year. I will study hard after work. I couldn't something after work last year because I was very tird. However, I'll try to live planned life.

강사 첨삭

Great morning Ms. [Name]!

Doing things which are dangerous things but it will not endanger your life are adventurous and exciting.

On my point of view, I guess so.
I like doing things which are adventurous and exciting.

If I have time to do these things, I will not deprive myself experiencing it. kkkk

And I wish you may have a good year at this time.

And your workload has been reduced so I think you will be able to do the things that you have to do.

Wish you all the best then.

See you again tomorrow Ms. [Name]!

Thanks for today!


Always,
Kathrine ^^


If you could do something dangerous just once with no risk what would you do?

I\'m a coward so I don\'t want to do dagerous things.

>> correct!

I also don\'t like amusement park because there are a lot of dangerous rides.

>>  I also don\'t like going to amusement parks because there are a lot of dangerous rides.

Actually I want to avoid it.

>>  correct!

However, if I have to do something dangerous, I will can do it.

>> However, if I have to do something dangerous, I will do it.

This is because there is no risk.

>>  correct!

At first, I will pray to God. Hahaha.

>>  correct!

And then I will close my eyes. KKK
>>  correct! 
Today, we have the time that is division of works.

>>  Today, we have a division of work.

So I know what I have to do in this year.

>>  So I know what I have to do this year.

I was very busy last year because my works were too heavy.

>>  correct!

I said to my supervisor about this.

>>  I told my supervisor about this.

They understood my situation so my works are reduced.

>>  They understood my situation so my works were reduced.

I\'m happy and I may will live nicely in this year.

>>  I\'m happy and I may live nicely this year.

I will study hard after work.

>>  correct!

I couldn\'t something after work last year because I was very tird.

>>  I couldn\'t something after work last year because I was very tired.

However, I\'ll try to live planned life.

>>  However, I\'ll try to live a planned to life.

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