Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Great morning Ms. [Name]!
Doing things which are dangerous things but it will not endanger your life are adventurous and exciting.
On my point of view, I guess so.
I like doing things which are adventurous and exciting.
If I have time to do these things, I will not deprive myself experiencing it. kkkk
And I wish you may have a good year at this time.
And your workload has been reduced so I think you will be able to do the things that you have to do.
Wish you all the best then.
See you again tomorrow Ms. [Name]!
Thanks for today!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
If you could do something dangerous just once with no risk what would you do?
I\'m a coward so I don\'t want to do dagerous things.
>> correct!
I also don\'t like amusement park because there are a lot of dangerous rides.
>> I also don\'t like going to amusement parks because there are a lot of dangerous rides.
Actually I want to avoid it.
>> correct!
However, if I have to do something dangerous, I will can do it.
>> However, if I have to do something dangerous, I will do it.
This is because there is no risk.
>> correct!
At first, I will pray to God. Hahaha.
>> correct!
And then I will close my eyes. KKK
>> correct!
Today, we have the time that is division of works.
>> Today, we have a division of work.
So I know what I have to do in this year.
>> So I know what I have to do this year.
I was very busy last year because my works were too heavy.
>> correct!
I said to my supervisor about this.
>> I told my supervisor about this.
They understood my situation so my works are reduced.
>> They understood my situation so my works were reduced.
I\'m happy and I may will live nicely in this year.
>> I\'m happy and I may live nicely this year.
I will study hard after work.
>> correct!
I couldn\'t something after work last year because I was very tird.
>> I couldn\'t something after work last year because I was very tired.
However, I\'ll try to live planned life.
>> However, I\'ll try to live a planned to life.
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